Envy – to download

What! Will this guy never learn? Another cracking story ruined by an unsatisfactory end! Everything left suspended. Reader left up in the air, wondering.

In (poor) defence, finding some corny escape clause .. a bit of luck turning up out of the blue .. that ancient deus ex machina .. THAT always felt unsatisfactory too. Contrived .. just because this stupid writer has painted himself into a corner!

Best that can be said .. Ka-Lan survives. How can that be assured? Two more Ka-Lan stories to be posted. Hardly gonna waste that effort!
Maybe Ladia finds some backbone. Let’s say she takes Tyros out .. using her best martial arts moves. Tyros’ men stand amazed applauding from the sidelines .. never like the boss anyway .. spoiled brat! And pumped-up she beds Ka-Lan there and then.
You see, rendsz’ world can do corny too. Corny, unconvincing, contrived.

Whatever ..
The fully illustrated copy of “Envy” for downloading is available.
The illustrated chapter headings are housed in their own Gallery.

Tomorrow .. Back to Logan .. really sweating it out. Deciding he’s really going to take Aryobarzan on.
Or was it the other way round …?


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